I'm achievement driven and a result orientated Self Managed Superfund Associate, with 6+ years experience for the National Australia Bank. I'm Experienced in the Stock exchange realm,assessing Investment portfolios . I've demonstrated success in building customer loyalty, adhering to changing regulatory conditions in the Australian banking industry and achieving KPI'S for the Bank.
You should always keep your target position in mind. Write your summary to show how your experience and skills will easily translate to your new position. You have included some relevant content, but it is too weak to adequately highlight your experience or skillset. The goal is to convince hiring professionals that you are the ideal candidate for this role by including just the right amount of wording and avoiding any extra verbiage that is not directly relevant to the target role.
One strategy is to think in terms of how you made a difference. Describe what impact you had, what you changed or what you improved while in the position. Your past duties can be helpful in illustrating your skills and strengths so I suggest you select 4-6 valuecentered bullet points for each role in the past 10 years. Keep your target job role in mind and choose to include descriptions that show transferable skills and valuable contributions. Here are some questions to ask yourself to help identify what experience would be beneficial: What would your manager say were your strengths? What projects did you work on? What were the results? Did you manage others, work on a team or serve customers? What did you accomplish?